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Erika Lee's avatar

That's right Jinshuo! This one definitely needs some editing.

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Jade Chaffin's avatar

https://codepen.io/jarchaff/pen/YzNeprE?editors=1100

For this one, I used <m> in a couple of instances in which I wanted to draw attention, based on the way that I read the text. Any long words that didn't have hyphens got "&shy;" in areas where I thought it would make sense, and the URL and words with hyphens got the <wbr> tag. Every instance I saw of multiple adjectives got the <ins> and <del> treatment, as though the author were choosing better words each time. I used the <s> near the end, because it feels like the author is referring to changed information (I may not have used this correctly).

The sentence at the end feels like <small>, and the footnote gets this tag as well. Phew!

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Erika Lee's avatar

I appreciate that you highlighted the "you will listen to me" portion. Now if only my 11 year old would do so... I wasn't sure how you all would mark up the welsh name, being that it's unfamiliar, so just forcing it to wrap at the start of the line is a decent option.

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Erika Lee's avatar

Great markup! Good choices.

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Jen Kramer's avatar

🎉🎉🎉🔥🔥🔥 Lovely job! Don't forget the "" around your href on line 26. Likewise, don't forget to set the anchor for that link -- you need an ID somewhere so that link jumps to it. Otherwise you're looking great!

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kajal's avatar

👍👍

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Romola Chrzanowski's avatar

https://codepen.io/romola/pen/PoWMpvr

I am not completely satisfied with my treatment of the the last couple of Indiana U names and think they could be better. For some reason the link to my work looks funny. Maybe it is just getting late.

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Jen Kramer's avatar

I think it looks fabulous! Remember the styling is weird because it's all default HTML. However, your markup is great. You are doing really well -- keep up the good work!

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Romola Chrzanowski's avatar

Thanks for the feedback and encouragement. Onward and upward ..

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Ana AG's avatar

https://codepen.io/athelas85/pen/LYxXYWK

I bet missed a bunch. :/

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Jen Kramer's avatar

I think you did great. Nice work! Everything looks reasonable to me. 🎉🎉🎉🔥🔥🔥

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Jen Kramer's avatar

MDN says footnotes are subscripts, but I usually see them as superscripts in most places. In any case, this looks great - nicely done! 🎉🎉🎉🔥🔥🔥

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K Dickenson's avatar

I really don't have an answer for those folks at Indiana University.

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Jen Kramer's avatar

Karen, this looks fantastic! 🎉🎉🎉🔥🔥🔥 Great work! Love your use of small. I don't have an answer for IU, either. Thanks for sharing!

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Erika Lee's avatar

Yes, that's likely the choice I would make too for the long word (&shy;) versus the long url (<wbr>). And thank you for your edits!

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